The video clip is fine, although I miss more different shots and flatter resources to make the work more dynamic and entertaining.
Regarding the light, tell you that I think it is very good, especially the main light. I like its direction, its softness, its tone, well, everything. However, it would have made the backlight much more subtle, it is too visible and it takes away the prominence and strength of the main light. I would have put a warmer and much less powerful light. Well, actually I would not have put the light against it (but that is already a matter of personal taste) but if I put it, I would have made it smaller.
Regarding the framing, be careful not to cut the forehead so much, it makes the shot a little more uncomfortable for the viewer. This type of framing works very well when you want to give a strong narrative intention of tension, restlessness or the like, but for a vclip as nice as this, it is better to leave all the hair flat.
In any case, congratulations on your project and good luck with your small production company!
@enrique_silguero Thank you very much for the comments and especially for the advice !! I write them down and I take them into account, this type of comments that contribute so much are very much appreciated… .I will continue giving it cane and learning more….
A hug, and that you know that in Malaga you have a collaborator if you need one…;) Greetings!
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Lehrkraft PlusHello Jose.
Thanks for submitting your project!
The video clip is fine, although I miss more different shots and flatter resources to make the work more dynamic and entertaining.
Regarding the light, tell you that I think it is very good, especially the main light. I like its direction, its softness, its tone, well, everything. However, it would have made the backlight much more subtle, it is too visible and it takes away the prominence and strength of the main light. I would have put a warmer and much less powerful light. Well, actually I would not have put the light against it (but that is already a matter of personal taste) but if I put it, I would have made it smaller.
Regarding the framing, be careful not to cut the forehead so much, it makes the shot a little more uncomfortable for the viewer. This type of framing works very well when you want to give a strong narrative intention of tension, restlessness or the like, but for a vclip as nice as this, it is better to leave all the hair flat.
In any case, congratulations on your project and good luck with your small production company!
All the best!
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@enrique_silguero Thank you very much for the comments and especially for the advice !! I write them down and I take them into account, this type of comments that contribute so much are very much appreciated… .I will continue giving it cane and learning more….
A hug, and that you know that in Malaga you have a collaborator if you need one…;) Greetings!
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