First of all, thanks for sharing your story with us.
I had to google your story, my French is not the best.
Your story reminded me of a movie script, the beginning is pure action and speed, like an action movie. I believe that in order to turn your rich and creative material into literature, you would need to develop the plot further, perhaps breathing a little at the beginning and starting your journey perhaps less quickly. Your material is for a more advanced reader, perhaps thinking in chapters would give you peace of mind to develop your narrative.
Thank you for your constructive and interesting comment. For the development of my story, if I complete my descriptions to improve my plot, it can allow me to be slower. The chapters will be cut in stages, can I take the opportunity to talk about the characters and their stories?
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Lehrkraft PlusHi Claire.
First of all, thanks for sharing your story with us.
I had to google your story, my French is not the best.
Your story reminded me of a movie script, the beginning is pure action and speed, like an action movie. I believe that in order to turn your rich and creative material into literature, you would need to develop the plot further, perhaps breathing a little at the beginning and starting your journey perhaps less quickly. Your material is for a more advanced reader, perhaps thinking in chapters would give you peace of mind to develop your narrative.
Hope this helps.
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Hello.
Thank you for your constructive and interesting comment. For the development of my story, if I complete my descriptions to improve my plot, it can allow me to be slower. The chapters will be cut in stages, can I take the opportunity to talk about the characters and their stories?
I thank you for your help.
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