Hi Victor, thank you very much for sharing your project with us.
I congratulate you for the work done, the story is interesting and complex, you manage to generate suspense and develop the characters well. The images that you present to us are powerful and are very well described, we can clearly imagine the story. The open ending seems like a very good decision to me.
I hope the course has helped you to train your writing.
Keep writing and developing your creativity.
A hug
Alexandra.
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Teacher PlusHi Victor, thank you very much for sharing your project with us.
I congratulate you for the work done, the story is interesting and complex, you manage to generate suspense and develop the characters well. The images that you present to us are powerful and are very well described, we can clearly imagine the story. The open ending seems like a very good decision to me.
I hope the course has helped you to train your writing.
Keep writing and developing your creativity.
A hug
Alexandra.
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Hello Victor. I like your story. You manage to capture my attention when they see the events that take place during your text. Thanks. DDLV. *.:.
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