Hello, thanks for sharing your final project. It's great, I see that you have a good watercolor technique and you have a very attractive neutral palette.
My comment would be that you will try to find another composition for this piece, this would have been better to do in the small sketches phase and try different compositions.
I'm telling you because it gives me the feeling that there is a very large space on the right, in the entire margin, which greatly unbalances the image. I think it would have worked much better in a narrower and vertical format and the letters in the lower or upper part. It gives me the feeling that you tried to fill this space with those watercolor stains.
I hope you serve my advice. Congratulations and good job
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Teacher PlusHello, thanks for sharing your final project. It's great, I see that you have a good watercolor technique and you have a very attractive neutral palette.
My comment would be that you will try to find another composition for this piece, this would have been better to do in the small sketches phase and try different compositions.
I'm telling you because it gives me the feeling that there is a very large space on the right, in the entire margin, which greatly unbalances the image. I think it would have worked much better in a narrower and vertical format and the letters in the lower or upper part. It gives me the feeling that you tried to fill this space with those watercolor stains.
I hope you serve my advice. Congratulations and good job
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