I really like the idea and I think that work like this has a lot of potential.
Of the photos presented here, I especially like the sequence 7, 8 and 9.
For me, they are more to the point. These empty places are very evocative. The chairs, even without anyone sitting, make me think of a conversation that once took place there. The somewhat shabby little house also reminds me of the children who once played there.
Regarding something to be improved, I think the composition in some could be better worked on. In the first one, for example, the red sign on the left doesn't bring anything relevant, it just distracts from the point of interest, which for me are the banks further back. In 5 I would also try to get closer to the bottle and the table, which are much more interesting than the curb that appears in the foreground.
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Teacher PlusHi, @catselidis .
Thanks for the project.
I really like the idea and I think that work like this has a lot of potential.
Of the photos presented here, I especially like the sequence 7, 8 and 9.
For me, they are more to the point. These empty places are very evocative. The chairs, even without anyone sitting, make me think of a conversation that once took place there. The somewhat shabby little house also reminds me of the children who once played there.
Regarding something to be improved, I think the composition in some could be better worked on. In the first one, for example, the red sign on the left doesn't bring anything relevant, it just distracts from the point of interest, which for me are the banks further back. In 5 I would also try to get closer to the bottle and the table, which are much more interesting than the curb that appears in the foreground.
Good job, congratulations!
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displayname12283253
Thank you very much for your attention and analysis - always accurate and enriching.
It's great to have participated in the course and carried out this project. I hope you make new courses available for us to enjoy.
A big hug!!!
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