Due to my lack of knowledge on how to use the platform, I have not published this project that I finished approximately 3 years ago. I look forward to receiving feedback. Thank you.
I liked the ending above all, perhaps you could divide the text into paragraphs so that I could better understand that it is about another day or another time, because there were moments in which I was a little confused by the sequence of events.
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Due to my lack of knowledge on how to use the platform, I have not published this project that I finished approximately 3 years ago. I look forward to receiving feedback. Thank you.
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I liked the ending above all, perhaps you could divide the text into paragraphs so that I could better understand that it is about another day or another time, because there were moments in which I was a little confused by the sequence of events.
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@anagtorres01 Thank you very much. Your suggestion is very valid.
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