Please be aware that this is a piece of TRE-MEN-DO @elenawaaa , @elenawaaa . A very coherent and solid project that you have controlled from the beginning to the end.
Very elaborate and careful composition, drawing and inking. And separate mention of the color, the use of patterns and textures. The chiaroscuro in the grayscale version is very well structured and also great as you have adapted it to the color, achieving a clean and balanced palette.
I was surprised to see such a clever and justified use of the halftone screen. You have built the color of the piece by dithering and that is a real pass. "The Art of Halftone" should be titled the album (talk to the band). 😃
But all this I had already mentioned to you. As for the presentation of the project, which is what is missing, well 10, like everything else. Sufficient samples so that the process is understood without the content being repetitive or excessive; it's neatly arranged and you include enough visual treats like those cool mockups and the gif with the color process. 👍
To put some but ... I would have changed the first image of the project for the color cover in digital instead of in application. While the first image would have taken it along with the other mockups of the grayscale version. And maybe I would use another image for the project thumbnail instead of that montage that does not end up having the same punch as, for example, a crop of the cover.
But all this that I am telling you is already a personal opinion, the project is very well presented and is sold alone. 😉
@inkbadcompany I'll @inkbadcompany you until the end. There I have left it edited.
Thank you very much for all the teachers, I have really enjoyed doing the course and I have learned different ways of doing things, which always enriches the spirit.
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Teacher PlusPlease be aware that this is a piece of TRE-MEN-DO @elenawaaa , @elenawaaa . A very coherent and solid project that you have controlled from the beginning to the end.
Very elaborate and careful composition, drawing and inking. And separate mention of the color, the use of patterns and textures. The chiaroscuro in the grayscale version is very well structured and also great as you have adapted it to the color, achieving a clean and balanced palette.
I was surprised to see such a clever and justified use of the halftone screen. You have built the color of the piece by dithering and that is a real pass. "The Art of Halftone" should be titled the album (talk to the band). 😃
But all this I had already mentioned to you. As for the presentation of the project, which is what is missing, well 10, like everything else. Sufficient samples so that the process is understood without the content being repetitive or excessive; it's neatly arranged and you include enough visual treats like those cool mockups and the gif with the color process. 👍
To put some but ... I would have changed the first image of the project for the color cover in digital instead of in application. While the first image would have taken it along with the other mockups of the grayscale version. And maybe I would use another image for the project thumbnail instead of that montage that does not end up having the same punch as, for example, a crop of the cover.
But all this that I am telling you is already a personal opinion, the project is very well presented and is sold alone. 😉
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@inkbadcompany I'll @inkbadcompany you until the end. There I have left it edited.
Thank you very much for all the teachers, I have really enjoyed doing the course and I have learned different ways of doing things, which always enriches the spirit.
Long live the framework.
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Damn, great job! I like it!
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