Great job. What I like the most is that you have chosen a theme for your infographic that tells a story, that always makes a project much more meaningful. I have little to contribute to the project because the objective is perfectly achieved, I would only tell you that my eyes go to the part of the rump and the rump. It does not seem natural, although I have no reference to what the animal is like. Sometimes it is better to cover certain problem areas secretly with other known improvements or easier to represent, for example using the primary feathers to hide that part. I also see a bit of a lack of contrast, which is something that has happened to several of your colleagues, but it's just a matter of adjusting that contrast a bit with the curves. Think that in the composition we have another very dark element, with a lot of contrast that makes it even seem that the central element is flatter in contrast.
@romangm thank you very much for the comments. The truth is that I choked on several parts of the illustration, it is still difficult for me to adapt to the tools of the digital format. I decided to keep moving forward instead of getting stuck. Hopefully, I will soon have the time to repeat a similar project following what I learned in your course. I will follow your advice if I ever encounter a problem area again. Thank you very much again, greetings. Martha.
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Great job. What I like the most is that you have chosen a theme for your infographic that tells a story, that always makes a project much more meaningful. I have little to contribute to the project because the objective is perfectly achieved, I would only tell you that my eyes go to the part of the rump and the rump. It does not seem natural, although I have no reference to what the animal is like. Sometimes it is better to cover certain problem areas secretly with other known improvements or easier to represent, for example using the primary feathers to hide that part. I also see a bit of a lack of contrast, which is something that has happened to several of your colleagues, but it's just a matter of adjusting that contrast a bit with the curves. Think that in the composition we have another very dark element, with a lot of contrast that makes it even seem that the central element is flatter in contrast.
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@romangm thank you very much for the comments. The truth is that I choked on several parts of the illustration, it is still difficult for me to adapt to the tools of the digital format. I decided to keep moving forward instead of getting stuck. Hopefully, I will soon have the time to repeat a similar project following what I learned in your course. I will follow your advice if I ever encounter a problem area again. Thank you very much again, greetings. Martha.
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