As I already told you, it is a pleasure to see your drawings and I highly appreciate the effort you have made to adapt to the course.
I like the theme a lot, like escaping from tourist sites and find the charm of these seemingly banal streets.
I have already left you enough comments drawn in the previous phase.
In general it looks fantastic!
Perhaps there could be a little more contrast around the white so that it stood out and shone more (according to the memory I have of Ericeira's white man, who almost burned his eyes?)
Could certain colors exposed to the sun be brighter? (reds, oranges, ...) (The red in shadow of the car should be different from the sign (in the Sun), right?
Could the blacks in the windows be more expressive, with different values?
Would you like to perhaps see the possible reflection of the red of the car on the street?
All I mention are small details, more to generate discussion, than "corrections".
Congratulations again, you gave me a great desire to draw these streets in Ericeira with you.
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Profesor PlusHello Antonio,
As I already told you, it is a pleasure to see your drawings and I highly appreciate the effort you have made to adapt to the course.
I like the theme a lot, like escaping from tourist sites and find the charm of these seemingly banal streets.
I have already left you enough comments drawn in the previous phase.
In general it looks fantastic!
Perhaps there could be a little more contrast around the white so that it stood out and shone more (according to the memory I have of Ericeira's white man, who almost burned his eyes?)
Could certain colors exposed to the sun be brighter? (reds, oranges, ...) (The red in shadow of the car should be different from the sign (in the Sun), right?
Could the blacks in the windows be more expressive, with different values?
Would you like to perhaps see the possible reflection of the red of the car on the street?
All I mention are small details, more to generate discussion, than "corrections".
Congratulations again, you gave me a great desire to draw these streets in Ericeira with you.
A big hug!
Hugo
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