Overall the design here is very successful, it brings us as viewers well into the idea of the world and delivers some core shapes and elements that plant us well within an understanding of what is normal and what should be expected. Overall the materials read pretty well, though there is a general shine to everything that takes some lustre out of the metal and leaves us with a bit of a plastic read in the end, though that could be attributed to the semi-soft side light as well. Seeing as your main light is already quite soft, having that side light emulate a spot rather than fill would be a good idea.
Mostly I want to talk about the gesture here. The facial expression is so dour and glaring that the body feels overly stiff in contrast, and I would have loved to see what kind of bodily gestures could have been pulled off to match the facial expression better, so there is something to think about for the next one.
More than that I would say that working all thing to a common level is a good idea, some of the lower lines seem a tad rushed while the face is so worked out, and always try and pay due attention to hands, as it is one of those elements where the viewer will land their gaze, and it is a chance to impress c:
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Profesor PlusLook at this grumpy guy :D
Overall the design here is very successful, it brings us as viewers well into the idea of the world and delivers some core shapes and elements that plant us well within an understanding of what is normal and what should be expected. Overall the materials read pretty well, though there is a general shine to everything that takes some lustre out of the metal and leaves us with a bit of a plastic read in the end, though that could be attributed to the semi-soft side light as well. Seeing as your main light is already quite soft, having that side light emulate a spot rather than fill would be a good idea.
Mostly I want to talk about the gesture here. The facial expression is so dour and glaring that the body feels overly stiff in contrast, and I would have loved to see what kind of bodily gestures could have been pulled off to match the facial expression better, so there is something to think about for the next one.
More than that I would say that working all thing to a common level is a good idea, some of the lower lines seem a tad rushed while the face is so worked out, and always try and pay due attention to hands, as it is one of those elements where the viewer will land their gaze, and it is a chance to impress c:
Cheers!
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The painting is on a very professional level. The anatomy needs more work. Congratulations on the talent.
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