Nice job. You have a very personal inking and that is very good. Some things have to be polished. For example, the coachman's hat in panel 1 touches the background lines and makes it somewhat confusing. You should also have inked the buildings in the background with finer strokes because they eat up the prominence of the vignette.
Despite those details I see it very well. You are well on your way to mastering the technique.
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Profesor PlusNice job. You have a very personal inking and that is very good. Some things have to be polished. For example, the coachman's hat in panel 1 touches the background lines and makes it somewhat confusing. You should also have inked the buildings in the background with finer strokes because they eat up the prominence of the vignette.
Despite those details I see it very well. You are well on your way to mastering the technique.
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@sergibleda thank you very much Sergio I'm glad you liked it! and thanks for the recommendations, they are very useful, a big hug.
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