Wow, very nice ideas happening in your composition.
The game of proportions is incredible.
Putting the O's inside the other letters seemed great to me, and it doesn't hurt the readability of the word in the least.
I love how you used the colors and I think the idea of putting color inside the O's is great.
Sounds brilliant to me, a great way to get the most out of a short word.
Getting demanding, and taking advantage of the fact that the bases are already acquired, I can see that some lines lacked a bit of security and a bit of continuity. It is difficult to get good strokes at first when you are trying to enlarge the size of the letters. But more practice heals everything. If you have time, it would be nice if you try a few more of the same composition and I am sure that you will achieve more solid lines.
I send you a hug, thanks for sharing your project :)
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The colors of the city are garnet, yellow and blue. I have tried it...
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Teacher PlusWow, very nice ideas happening in your composition.
The game of proportions is incredible.
Putting the O's inside the other letters seemed great to me, and it doesn't hurt the readability of the word in the least.
I love how you used the colors and I think the idea of putting color inside the O's is great.
Sounds brilliant to me, a great way to get the most out of a short word.
Getting demanding, and taking advantage of the fact that the bases are already acquired, I can see that some lines lacked a bit of security and a bit of continuity. It is difficult to get good strokes at first when you are trying to enlarge the size of the letters. But more practice heals everything. If you have time, it would be nice if you try a few more of the same composition and I am sure that you will achieve more solid lines.
I send you a hug, thanks for sharing your project :)
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PlusVery nice result... Congratulations.
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