Hello Geo - @geo8agmx
I'm going for the evaluation of your project.
First of all tell you that I am happy to upload a new project, but we have to work a bit on the colors, in the sense that some of them are quite muted, in some of the photos there is a very high contrast of blacks, which makes that in trees or in some specific areas a stain is appreciated rather than a shade of black or gray, so in general, if the photo is already off, the problem we find is that there is nothing that stands out to be able to be viewing the photo for more than a minute.
Another thing is that I lack history, it can be the order or the selection. To be able to tell a travel story, we must notice a connection between some, sometimes a text helps, so I invite you to explain a little that vision and why that selection of images.
In the image of the church, don't you notice that there is a predominant color, not only in the sky, but also in white?
Finally, the third and fourth, the third photograph if it is edited in Lightroom, see to adjust the parameters of the lens and the deformation, if you look closely, it seems that the body is a little sunken, for that it can be manually adjusted so that it can be seen better and the lines are straight, and as for the fourth ... I think there is a slip of lowering the brightness or the whites too much, since in case the photo in some parts the whites were burned.
I encourage you between the two of us to give this project a spin and above all to edit the photos with a little more light.
@olivervegas thank you very much for your comments, I will apply your recommendations, it is precisely what I need, the feedback to improve, thank you.
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Professeur PlusHello Geo - @geo8agmx
I'm going for the evaluation of your project.
First of all tell you that I am happy to upload a new project, but we have to work a bit on the colors, in the sense that some of them are quite muted, in some of the photos there is a very high contrast of blacks, which makes that in trees or in some specific areas a stain is appreciated rather than a shade of black or gray, so in general, if the photo is already off, the problem we find is that there is nothing that stands out to be able to be viewing the photo for more than a minute.
Another thing is that I lack history, it can be the order or the selection. To be able to tell a travel story, we must notice a connection between some, sometimes a text helps, so I invite you to explain a little that vision and why that selection of images.
In the image of the church, don't you notice that there is a predominant color, not only in the sky, but also in white?
Finally, the third and fourth, the third photograph if it is edited in Lightroom, see to adjust the parameters of the lens and the deformation, if you look closely, it seems that the body is a little sunken, for that it can be manually adjusted so that it can be seen better and the lines are straight, and as for the fourth ... I think there is a slip of lowering the brightness or the whites too much, since in case the photo in some parts the whites were burned.
I encourage you between the two of us to give this project a spin and above all to edit the photos with a little more light.
A big hug and I await your comments!
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@olivervegas thank you very much for your comments, I will apply your recommendations, it is precisely what I need, the feedback to improve, thank you.
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