Thanks for sharing your project.
The location you chose seems to me to be a place with a lot of potential, it looks very nice in general.
From the light I see, I could think that it is after noon, usually this type of light tends to cast very harsh shadows, but I think you handled it quite well in this regard (congratulations). I also think that having waited a little longer to have "the golden hour" would have given you some very interesting colors, especially in this type of location. If you have the opportunity to go to this space again, I invite you to try it.
The model's expression could feel that it is a little tense, not too much, but I think it could be a little more relaxed.
One point that I think is important to mention is the photographic retouching (in order for your work to grow and have a much more editorial character).
It seems to me that the idea is that the sky stands out much more and that it is expressive, however there are some details where there is not a good "match" of the background with the figure of the model (in the hair there is not a good fusion of the images).
Also, as mentioned above, the photos were taken during the day and the colors of the skies (pinks / violets) do not correspond to that time of day and the sensation that is perceived is that they are unreal.
As I mentioned above, I recommend you (if your intention is to have such expressive skies) is that you do your photographic sessions at times of the day where the light conditions are those (sunrises and sunsets).
It certainly seems to me that you will have more natural, expressive results and of course the editorial retouching work will be much less.
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Professeur PlusDavid Hi.
Thanks for sharing your project.
The location you chose seems to me to be a place with a lot of potential, it looks very nice in general.
From the light I see, I could think that it is after noon, usually this type of light tends to cast very harsh shadows, but I think you handled it quite well in this regard (congratulations). I also think that having waited a little longer to have "the golden hour" would have given you some very interesting colors, especially in this type of location. If you have the opportunity to go to this space again, I invite you to try it.
The model's expression could feel that it is a little tense, not too much, but I think it could be a little more relaxed.
One point that I think is important to mention is the photographic retouching (in order for your work to grow and have a much more editorial character).
It seems to me that the idea is that the sky stands out much more and that it is expressive, however there are some details where there is not a good "match" of the background with the figure of the model (in the hair there is not a good fusion of the images).
Also, as mentioned above, the photos were taken during the day and the colors of the skies (pinks / violets) do not correspond to that time of day and the sensation that is perceived is that they are unreal.
As I mentioned above, I recommend you (if your intention is to have such expressive skies) is that you do your photographic sessions at times of the day where the light conditions are those (sunrises and sunsets).
It certainly seems to me that you will have more natural, expressive results and of course the editorial retouching work will be much less.
I send you a greeting.
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