Hello lisa! Thanks for taking the course!
The design you propose is elegant and friendly. The typographic choice, the colors... everything conveys calm, serenity, naturalness. I think the centered logo conveys a naturalness that works better with photographs and the typographic cover (very powerful!) than with flat-color illustrations. What needs to be improved: the headlines would look better with a little more attention to the line spacing, which is too generous, which dilutes them a bit. !! Congratulations!!
@diegoareso thank you so much for the course and the constructive criticism. I will definitely make more versions and take note of the line spacing. I would love another course on editorial illustration for a current affairs article. Thanks!
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Insegnante PlusHello lisa! Thanks for taking the course!
The design you propose is elegant and friendly. The typographic choice, the colors... everything conveys calm, serenity, naturalness. I think the centered logo conveys a naturalness that works better with photographs and the typographic cover (very powerful!) than with flat-color illustrations. What needs to be improved: the headlines would look better with a little more attention to the line spacing, which is too generous, which dilutes them a bit. !! Congratulations!!
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@diegoareso thank you so much for the course and the constructive criticism. I will definitely make more versions and take note of the line spacing. I would love another course on editorial illustration for a current affairs article. Thanks!
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