Hello Nelson, thank you very much for sharing your project with us. I think it is an interesting exercise to explain a somewhat complex message, and I think it is a success that you largely dispense with images and rely on text highlights to ensure understanding.
There is only one point where I think the visual resource is not used correctly: at minute 1'12 ", when you introduce the tweet, it is difficult to read the text of the message at the same time that the voiceover responds precisely to that message .
For the rest, thanks for the effort and for sharing it!
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Insegnante PlusHello Nelson, thank you very much for sharing your project with us. I think it is an interesting exercise to explain a somewhat complex message, and I think it is a success that you largely dispense with images and rely on text highlights to ensure understanding.
There is only one point where I think the visual resource is not used correctly: at minute 1'12 ", when you introduce the tweet, it is difficult to read the text of the message at the same time that the voiceover responds precisely to that message .
For the rest, thanks for the effort and for sharing it!
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