Hi Mariana,
In the first audio I think you could give it a little more feeling for all those young people you comment on. Play it some more. In the second we do need that neutrality in the speech to make it more informative and in the third you are very good but you could give each sentence more time and make everything a little slower so that the poetry has more force. The phonic groups are fine, but don't forget that repeating and repeating is the basis for achieving what you set out to do. Nice voice.
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Professor PlusHi Mariana,
In the first audio I think you could give it a little more feeling for all those young people you comment on. Play it some more. In the second we do need that neutrality in the speech to make it more informative and in the third you are very good but you could give each sentence more time and make everything a little slower so that the poetry has more force. The phonic groups are fine, but don't forget that repeating and repeating is the basis for achieving what you set out to do. Nice voice.
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Thank you very much for your feedback Sergio! Well, keep practicing and running from the comfortable until you find the point. Greetings!
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